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final draft reflection

1. how did your final draft turn out?
- I think my final (so far) has much more detail then how it started. Its more in-depth and goes more into the emotional side of things.

2. what did you work on?
- Being more clear and giving examples to back up my quote.

3. what was difficult?
- the most difficult thing to do was make it relatable so people would want to read it.

4. strengths? weaknesses?
- strengths- my strengths for this essay were probably my personal experiences. being able to use what I felt and bring my essay to life
5.  More time?
- I did have an extension so I'm not sure if I would change anything
6. top points.
 Quotes are used as evidence in body paragraphs
Quotes are correctly connected to sentences 
Quotes are discussed and analyzed in body paragraphs 

lose points.
structure

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